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It's sad,
How people lock themselves up,
In their own little world.

We lie to ourselves,
Say that everything's alright,
Everythings fine.

We wear the mask,
And act the part,
And say it's all part of the show.

We live in boxes,
See in darkness,
And speak in lies.

I't's our world
That we live in,
Why should it change?
This poem is about those people...

It's sad...
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This poem is amazing... I can relate to it soo much.
This poem reminds me of my life :) it is very well exicuted. The point comes across easily. The poem itself is easy to understand, and to be frank some poems are not that easy to understand. When you read this poem there are so many things in it that different people can relate to. I really like the fact that the poem ends in a question. Over all it is an most excellent poem.. Thank you for uploading :) I love the part about the mask its soo true..
thanks again :)
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Cinders8328 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
THe name says it so well
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Nalany22 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  New member Hobbyist Photographer
T-T beautiful but sad... and so true... x3 T-T
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xXMASKY666Xx Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student General Artist
I'm one of those people. Like the profile pic, btw.
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StkSkull Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Student General Artist
We don't like it however we still constantly acting like idiots day by day... Nice poem! ^^
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iiRebelA Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Miuna Crying Icon Miuna Crying Icon Miuna Crying Icon 
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WaitWhatWhy123 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
-looks down at feet-
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eyesgluedshut Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I agree w/ YouAreMore on this one. Really a fenomenal poem.
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M44dusk Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Student General Artist
...this is how I am everyday....but I have tried and I can't seem to change.
it's the trauma. 
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JackFgf Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014
We don't because we can't.
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ShadowWalker25 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Crying  I love this but am so miserable that I can relate.
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